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August 20, 2004
little secrets
Revised Chapter Twenty-Seven slightly. The second section I wrote last night felt off and so was removed but not deleted; I always save the good-but-off scenes in a file for later reference. Replaced it with something I hope to be stronger.
Halfway through. And like an annoying little earworm begging for attention, I find myself wanting to listen to the next Gunslinger novel....
(Maybe I'll read it on my next flight to San Diego.)
- we are the inheritors
the evidence of heaven
Posted by sdshaver at August 20, 2004 01:37 AM