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October 28, 2004

REWRITES - ch. 7 and 8 - bleeding pages

And the award for the most heavily edited page of the night goes to....

Bleeeeeed!

Yes, all those red marks are corrections. (No, there isn't a bigger version.) But in case you're wondering why this process is slow...pages like that are why. (And large chunks of 7 and 8 had to be overhauled.)

My manuscript is bleeding.

Now that I know I have a ways to go before the anthology story is due, it's settled back into my head and is allowing me to work on the Monster instead. This is good. I want the story to percolate.

Posted by sdshaver at October 28, 2004 01:11 AM