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November 18, 2004
ch. 32 - revisions
Last line for the night: "It appears we have much to discuss."
So far I'm doing good on the condensing. Thirty-two is done in rough form. Thirty-three will be more cannabalizing, though I suspect I'll completely rewrite one scene which was a pretty major reveal that I kind of glossed over. In this version, I've done better at alluding to it rather than just dropping it in the reader's lap (a practice I detest).
Okay, go to bed, Steph.
To bed, Steph!
- To the living we owe respect,
but to the dead we owe only the truth.
-Voltaire
Posted by sdshaver at November 18, 2004 02:21 AM