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November 17, 2004
ch. 32 - revisions
Some revising done, and stronger scenes hath emerged. Yea.
Translation: Minor revisions to 17 and 31, one major one to 16 and further writings into 32. Lest some of you despair that I'm playing WoW, I'll have you know I didn't tonight. The book is fighting with my Undead Warlock. The book is winning.
Yep. I can finish this over Thanksgiving and do edits the week after. Sure.
The goal is to slice off a few chapters, for those of you playing along at home. I also removed a whole subplot that didn't do much for the story. Actually, I've effectively removed two as of tonight. You're thrilled, I know.
- Never mind the poultry,
I’d rather stay at home
I hope that my old lady’s feeling
like a lazy Jane
Posted by sdshaver at November 17, 2004 12:53 AM