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November 20, 2004
REVISE - ch. 33 - braaaaains
Cannabalized bits for chapter 33. It's now fleshed out. And lots stronger (I feel).
This was the chapter of the secondary characters. Ishna, Eril, and Qeta all get some great lines.
I want to learn to knit!
- I came across a fallen tree
I felt the branches of it looking at me
Is this the place we used to love?
Is this the place that I've been dreaming of?
Posted by sdshaver at November 20, 2004 01:52 AM