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December 08, 2004

ch. 42 - points of failure

There are five points of tweaking in the current ending, not the least of which is that I totally forgot one character's usefulness.

Other than that, I'm relatively happy with it. But some scenes are going to need revising. Mostly fight stuff, and progression of bad things happening.

I watched Adaptation. tonight, and thought it captured the struggle to write fairly well. Or maybe it's just me.

I owe tons of people tons of webwork and emails, I owe myself many trips to the dojo, I have fruitcakes and white trash (candy) to make, and caught in the grip of this stupid novel, I have done none of the above. Shit.

Posted by sdshaver at December 8, 2004 01:12 AM