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January 10, 2005
hard copy revisions - ch. 24
Bloodied up chapter 24 last night. Worried about trivial things. Got to bed before 1 AM, which is quite an accomplishment for me.
I found some very old stories this morning. Things from 1998, 1999. The original 23-page story that started Myr's story (called "Tell Me a Story"). Things were very different in her world, six years ago (she was the younger sibling, her mother was still alive, she had a grandfather, a voice, and she was much more girly).
Also, a Sword and Sorceress submission called "The Breath of Her Wings" that failed...and for good reason -- a 5300 word genre story should not have seven active characters. I can see how I could retrofit it for Myr's world if I ever bother (and I might, if the book sells).
Posted by sdshaver at January 10, 2005 10:35 AM