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January 29, 2005
little pigs
Ah, the danger of opening chapter the first. I ended up rewriting a chunk nestled around pages 4-6. Huge slab of tell where it should have been show.
I am big on stomping on tell stuff.
I won't make the mistake of opening up the earlier stuff again until I'm done editing 31-42. Chapters 1-3 will get extra critical attention then.
I spent 42 minutes on various torture devices fitness machines tonight. They are extremely good for pushing ideas around in one's overclocked cranium.
- and the ship
the black freighter
with fifty long cannons
opens fire on the town
Posted by sdshaver at January 29, 2005 02:53 AM
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