January 05, 2005
revisions - coming to a close
Major story revisions are coming to a close. I'm going to be doing another (yes, another) print-out and revise by hand this weekend. I think. I could almost give the book to friends, except I'm sure there are story discrepancies from the major changes I've made, and I don't want to confuse them as to why it is Ishna's robes are vermillion in one chapter, and black in the next.
I'm at a stage right now where I'm really happy with the story. I hammered out most of the bugs. I hope.
I also like the shape of the Valdemar story and can't wait to start it. It'll be a challenge, but it'll be fun. The Concordance is pretty damn good, though I'm not sure it answers all the questions I have. Still, reading through it reminds me of why I love that world so much.
My basement is wet. That sucks. Also, it's 2 AM and I have been writing and editing for four hours. Need to go to sleep. Night.
- Mistook their nods for an approval
Just ignore the smoke and smile
Call it aftermath, she's turning blue
Posted by sdshaver at January 5, 2005 02:20 AM