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May 08, 2005
chapter one, part one
Found a new entry point for chapter one, and possibly a more tantalizing, less clichéd one. I fear the cliché, but since I am one big cliché, I don't know that there's anything I can do about it.
Anyway, this flowed whereas the other was somewhat forced, and thus I feel it has promise.
I'm supposed to be up in seven hours so I can go hiking at 1 PM. Foolish girl....
- lying alone in the twilight zone
waiting for your call to come in
Posted by sdshaver at May 8, 2005 04:50 AM