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May 23, 2005
chapter two - rewrites
Chapter Two mostly salvaged and rewritten. Next three chapters are going to be almost entirely rewritten, but it should be easy going. I know what I need to say, and where to go with it.
The henna betrayed me, so I went back to good ol' dyes and chemicals. My hair is now once more dark-brown-brick-red. Like dutch cocoa. Or devil's food.
Considering renaming the book The Firebird's Wish. Fits my needs. Fits the storyline. Gonna go with it. Despite that, I'll continue to refer to it as Winter for now. Once revisions are done, we'll see if the new name sticks.
Posted by sdshaver at May 23, 2005 02:09 AM