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July 21, 2005
chapter 22 revisit
Forgot to blog in last night. I was here at the keyboard, but I was way too tired to do anything but write and then go to bed.
My re-read told me that I didn't like how I handled 22 as much as I thought I did. The little niggling voice said it was wrong ("Too pat" according to her), and I agreed. So the scene in question got a rehaul, and will see a few more revisions before I move on to 23.
Posted by sdshaver at July 21, 2005 12:20 PM