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August 30, 2005
minor changes
Minor changes, mostly re-reading and re-acquainting. There's something I need to convey in chapter two, and I'm not getting it right. I spent an hour revising one paragraph. Bad sign.
Will tackle it again tomorrow.
Posted by sdshaver at August 30, 2005 02:53 AM