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September 11, 2005
chapter 8 (rewrite)
And eight is now re-edited and revisited. There are a couple things I may shuffle off to other chapters, if I can. A lot happens to the heroine in 6-9, which makes arranging the series of events delicate. Too much, and I'll overload the reader. Too little, and....
Oh, fuck it. I just can't pontifiate at 4:30 AM. Night!
Posted by sdshaver at September 11, 2005 04:35 AM