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November 16, 2005
chapter 16 (fix)
The survival scene has been fixed. This world's Death came to me. Drawing him was fun. He looks a bit like King Mob, but not.
Also? My badguy got to be bad. Poor, frozen Ria. (Frozen 'Rita?)
I made COPIOUS NOTES IN ALL CAPS on what to fix in the revisions. Themes that I need to make sure are carried throughout the rest of the story.
Now I'm back to the 20-30 hump! I need to plot this out, which will be tomorrow, most likely. Yay!
Posted by sdshaver at November 16, 2005 12:50 AM