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March 13, 2006

chapter 1, my eternal foe

Revised again. And this time, more action, and yet also more exposition. How can this be? Golly, I just don't know.

I'm not up early. I'M UP LATE. Because I stupidly asked the subconscious to do the work, I woke up at 4 AM with the solution and the words knocking too hard on my head to let me sleep.

Nuts. :\

Posted by sdshaver at March 13, 2006 05:42 AM