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September 11, 2006
outline: ch. 4
Hurray for outlines, pointing out obvious plot and pacing problems. That's fixed, and the two-page chapter four summary is done, and I am salivating to write this in full.
The sample I posted is already out of date. I really love the magic of this world.
I'd go on to five, but sleep calls. G'night.
- kept secrets of pride locked so tight in her heart
it killed a part of her
before the rest was gone.
and just like james,
i'm drinking irish tonight
Posted by sdshaver at September 11, 2006 12:43 AM